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Jaciane Freitas
Brazilian women Here in Brazil in the olimpic games, was registraded in police station many cases of rape attempts by some athletes to women that were working in the place. And so I ask to myself:"what the world thinks of us? The sexual tourism have released the women as a tourist attraction making us simple objects. I'm so sad because I see this reflection in chat to improve my english when some men invite me for chat with disrespectfully. But they aren't all like that. Others help me with english really. Thanks so much for all them. But women, where are you for help others women? Let's go!!! Women reserve respect no matter your country, race or social class.

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Brazilian Women

Here in Brazil in the Olympic Games, police have recorded many cases of attempted rape by athletes on women working there. And so I ask myself: "what does the world think of us? Sexual tourism has treated(?) the women as a tourist attraction making us simple objects. I'm so sad because I see this reflected in chat to improve my English when some men disrespectfully invite me for a chat. But they aren't all like that. Others really help me with English. Thanks so much to all of them. But women, where are you to help your sisters? Let's go!!! Women reserve respect no matter their country, race or social class.

Very well written!

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