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Gerardo
A little about me I'm Gerardo from Argentina. I live in Buenos Aires but I grew up in a little town on the outskirts of this huge city. I'm an Systems Analyst and I've been a dedicated English student for many months. Every day, I try to do something to improve my English such as watching TV programmes, listening to radios from UK or watching movies without Spanish subtitle. I also make my homework which usually is a considerable number of exercises. Obviously, learning English is not all in my life. I enjoy spending time with my friends, and whenever it's possible, visiting new places in the countryside.
2016년 10월 26일 오전 2:18
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A little about me

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Obviously, learning English is not <strike>all</strike>  everything in my life. I enjoy spending time with my friends, and whenever it's possible, visiting new places in the countryside.
2016년 10월 26일
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A little about me

I'm Gerardo from Argentina. I live in Buenos Aires but I grew up in a little town on the outskirts of this huge city. I'm an Systems Analyst and I've been a dedicated English student for many months. Every day, I try to do something to improve my English such as watching TV programmes, listening to radio from the UK or watching movies without Spanish subtitles. I also do homework which usually comprises a considerable number of exercises.

Obviously, learning English is not all in my life. I enjoy spending time with my friends, and whenever possible, visiting new places in the countryside.

Very well written!

2016년 10월 26일
Lorna, thank you for your comments. I started studying English around 8 years ago, but it has been only 3 years that I've been studying it uninterruptedly. I'm studying at a language school in Buenos Aires.
2016년 10월 26일
Hey Gerardo! I can't add any corrections to the ones you have, and there weren't so many to begin with. Your written English is great! For how long have you been learning ?
2016년 10월 26일
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