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Amadís Herrera
My favourite sport (please correct me if you can)
My favourite sport is soccer, i just love it, i watch every important game on t.v, and i like to see my team winning. I'm a fan of Universidad Catolica Football Club, I can't remember when i choose to be of that team, i was 5 year old or less, i'm not sure. When i have a game to play and i feel bad or nervous, i just need to stand on the field and my whole system feels already fine, it's a funny thing but i always feel better playing soccer. In christmas my dad always gave us a soccer ball, he knew that me and my brother would be very happy with that gift.
2016년 10월 27일 오전 4:35
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My favourite sport (please correct me if you can)
My favourite sport is soccer, i just love it, i watch every important game on t.v, and i like to see my team winning. I'm a fan of Universidad Catolica Football Club, I can't remember when i choose chose to be a fan of that team, i was 5 year years old or less, i'm not sure. When i have a game to play and i feel bad or nervous, i just need to stand on the field and suddenly my whole system feels already fine, it's a funny thing but i always feel better playing soccer. In At christmas my dad always gave us a soccer ball, he knew that me myself and my brother would be very happy with that gift.Note: Always use a capital I when talking about yourself rather than a small i
eg: I always feel better - not i always feel better
2016년 10월 27일
My favorite sport (please correct me if you can)
My favorite sport is soccer, I just love it. I watch every important game on t.v., and I like to see my team winning. I'm a fan of Universidad Catolica Football Club, but I can't remember when I chose to be of that team. I was 5 year old or less, I'm not sure. When I have a game to play and I feel bad or nervous, I just need to stand on the field and my whole system feels already fine, it's a funny thing but I always feel better playing soccer. In Christmastime my dad always gave us a soccer ball, he knew that my brother and I would be very happy with that gift.Buen trabajo! A few things: always capitalize "I", and remember the difference between "choose" and "chose". Chose is always past tense! (http://writingexplained.org/choose-vs-chose-difference). Also, in the last sentence, I think you should use "I", instead of "me". (http://www.elearnenglishlanguage.com/blog/english-mistakes/i-vs-me/)
2016년 10월 27일
My favourite sport (please correct me if you can)
My favourite sport is soccer. I just love it. I watch every important game on t.v, and i like to see my team winning. I'm a fan of Universidad Catolica Football Club, I can't remember when I started to follow that team., i was 5 years old or younger I'm not sure. When i have a game to play and i feel bad or nervous, i just need to stand on the field and my entire body feels fine, it's a funny thing but i always feel better playing soccer. In christmas my dad always gave us a soccer ball, he knew that me and my brother would be very happy with that gift.2016년 10월 27일
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