Diary-99 (Chernobyi Nuclear Plant)
Chernobyl Nuclear Plant is located in the north of Ukraine, it has only 140km to the capital Kiev, it was the first nuclear plant that was built within the boundaries of Ukraine during the former Soviet Union.
Chernobyl was called "The safest and the most reliable nuclear plant". In 1986, with a tremendous noise, which Chernobyl' safty was broken, the nuclear radiation is equivalent to 500 atomic bombs that The United States dropped to Japan.
Chernobyl' disaster never go away.
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Americans did not vote as a group to bomb Hiroshima. It was a decision made by one man, not by the people of America. I hope all Japanese people understand that this was not the actions of Americans, just as all Americans to not believe that every Japanese person wanted to bomb Pearl Harbor.
------------------------ These are military decisions made by officials not elected by the people. They are appointed by the government. Americans do not control specific military actions of our country. In fact we protest most of them. --------------------------We are usually very divided when it comes to war / pro - anti. Personally, in the end, I feel war is simply the killing of people. That is never a good thing. The victims and the families always suffer. Peace everyone.
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Diary-99 (Chernobyl Nuclear Plant) << be careful with your spelling
Chernobyl Nuclear Plant is located in northern Ukraine,Chernobyl was called (known as) "The safest and the most reliable nuclear plant". In 1986, with a tremendous noise,
The Chernobyl disaster never really went away.
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