I'm making on web site. I'd like to post following sentences. Could you check them? Do you like Japanese cuisine? Do you know how to cook them? I'll teach you how to cook healthy and a well-blanced

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I'm making on web site. I'd like to post following sentences. Could you check them? Do you like Japanese cuisine? Do you know how to cook them? I'll teach you how to cook healthy and a well-blanced diet. You are what you eat. If you cook readily at home, you'll be happy and health everyday. Please don't worry! It's pretty easy. Also you can know about Japanese culture more deeply. Cooking beginners are welcome. Let's enjoy cooking and eating together!

2016년 11월 12일 오후 1:11

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Do you like Japanese cuisine? Do you know how to cook them Japanese dishes?

I'll teach you how to cook healthy and have a well-blanced diet. You are what you eat.
If you cook readily at home, you'll be happy and healthy everyday.
Please don't worry! It's pretty easy.
Also, you can know learn more about Japanese culture.
Cooking Beginners are welcome. Let's enjoy cooking and eating together!

(Sounds like a interesting website entry, Yoshie~san.)

2016년 11월 12일

Ms. Athena, Thank you so much!

2016년 11월 12일

Good idea

2016년 11월 12일

It looks really well!!! If you plan on teaching about Japanese cuisine you might want to say "Also you can learn about" instead of "Also you can know about"

2016년 11월 12일

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