A for and against essay about downloading music in internet

Nowadays, many people think that downloading music on Internet is a good practice for everyone. But the question is, is it really comfortable and safe as we think?
On the one hand, If someone downloads music on Internet, he will have a lot of problems. Firstly, the quality is not very high and it is an illegal action since musicians do not get paid for their work and they do not succeed as they would like to. Besides, If people usually visited those illegal sites, they would damage with virus their computer their computer with a virus/viruses. As a result, people may spend their money on repairing their computer.
On the other hand, downloading music do does not cost as much CD’s which cost too much. In addition, people might download all of the songs that they want and do not have to go to the shop ad and buy it. Therefore, If people download music and share it with their friends, authors will be more popular. Moreover, you can have music which are/is only are found on YouTube because it has a private code.
To sum up, even though downloading music might be dangerous and difficult for beginners in Internet, in my opinion, it is a good way to get music and enjoy it. I strongly believe that governments should not forbid this act.

Hi Naiara, good piece! I like how you put both opinions on this. I have highlighted the word comfortable because I don't think that it's the correct word for this particular sentence. I think this is a result of technology becoming more advanced and more open to everyone. Perhaps musicians need to be more creative with how they make money? Merchandise, concerts and branding are all also important sources of income for them.