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Computers will replace teachers in the nearest future
Some people think that computers will replace teachers in the nearlest future. But is it try?
On the one hand computers are very useful thing in our life. We can get a lot of interesting and important information from it. And also computer is technical progress. Our world doesn't stand on the one place, and we should do the same develops.
But on the other hand this technic is evil. Most of children spend much time on games. And in my view it isn't possible that computer can replace teacher. Person can explain a lot of life's situations that computer can't. Futhermore, if computers will replace teachers, teachers would lose theirs jobs thad is very sad.
In conclusion I want say that it is possible that computers could replace teachers in the future, becouse there is distance studing now. But if it will happen, a lot of teachers would lose theirs jobs.
2016년 11월 27일 오후 6:45
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Computers will replace teachers in the nearest future
Some people think that computers will replace teachers in the nearlest future. But is it true?On the one hand computers are very useful things/devices in our life. We can get a lot of interesting and important information from them. And also a computer is a technical progress. Our world doesn't stand in the one place, and we should do the same development.
But on the other hand this technic is evil. Most of children spend much/a lot of time playing games. And in my view it isn't possible that a computer could replace a teacher. A person can explain a lot of life's situations that a computer can't. Futhermore, if computers will replace teachers teachers will lose theirs jobs which is very sad.
In conclusion I want to say that it is possible that computers could replace teachers in the future because there is distance learning nowadays (distance learning is becoming more and more popular). But if it will happens a lot of teachers will lose their jobs.
В придаточных условия и времени , т.е. после when и if будущее время не употребляется, вместо этого используется настоящее простое время.
Theirs - абсолютная форма притяжательного местоимения their, которое употребляется без существительного.
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2016년 11월 27일
Computers'll never replace the teachers
2016년 11월 27일
Computers will replace teachers in the nearest future
Some people think that computers will replace teachers in the near future. But is it possible?On the one hand computers are very useful things in our life. We can get a lot of interesting and important information from it. And also, computer is technical progress. Our world doesn't stand on the first place, and we should do the same develops.
however, on the other hand this technic is evil. Most of the children spend much time on games . And in my view it isn't possible that computer can replace a teacher. Person can explain a lot of life's situations that computer can't. Furthermore, if computers will replace teachers(you have to not use will in if clause), teachers would lose theirs jobs thad is very sad(which is a pity).
In conclusion, I want to say that it is possible that computers could replace teachers in the future, because there is distance(distance is noun) studying now. But(but after comma-however after dot) if it will happen, a lot of teachers would lose theirs jobs.
2016년 11월 27일
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