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Leisure time It is a well-known fact that we have more leisure time than we did forty or fifty years ago, and it is not only due to technological development but also to having better working conditions, the possibility of having a part-time work and also because housework take less time. Regardless of the reasons, the key point is how we use this leisure time, and in my view we use it to improve ourselves. For instance, it is widely thought that surfing on the internet is a waste of time because you do it alone and without interaction, but this is not strictly true because you can use it as a meeting point to find out activities to do with a group of people with the same hobbies as you: a book club, a sport team, voluntary activities or hiking. In conclusion and as I see it, our life is time and thinking that most people waist their free time is a negative generalization and does not correspond to the facts we can see in our cities where people are enjoying outdoor or cultural activities.

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Leisure time

It is a well-known fact that we have more leisure time than we did forty or fifty years ago, and it is not only due to technological development but also to having better working conditions, the possibility of having a part-time work job (what you wrote makes sense but we'd typically say "having a part-time job, OR "having part time work") and also because housework takes less time. Regardless of the reasons, the key point is how we use this leisure time, and in my view we use it to improve ourselves.

For instance, it is widely thought that surfing on the internet is a waste of time because you do it alone and without interaction, but this is not strictly true because you can use it as a meeting point to find (out) (you don't need to say this) activities to do with a group of people with the same hobbies as you: a book club, a sport(s) team, voluntary activities or hiking.

In conclusion and as I see it, our life is time and thinking that most people waist waste their free time is a negative generalization and does not correspond to the facts we can see in our cities where people are enjoying outdoor or cultural activities.
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Leisure time

It is a well-known fact that we have more leisure time than we did forty or fifty years ago, and it is not only due to technological development but also to having better working conditions, the possibility of having a part-time work and also because housework takes less time. Regardless of the reasons, the key point is how we use this leisure time, and in my view we use it to improve ourselves.

For instance, it is widely thought that surfing on the internet is a waste of time because you do it alone and without interaction, but this is not strictly true because you can use it as a meeting point to find out activities to do with a group of people with the same hobbies as you: a book club, a sport team, voluntary activities or hiking.

In conclusion, and as I see it, our life is time and thinking that most people waist their free time is a negative generalization and does not correspond to the facts we can see in our cities where people are enjoying outdoor or cultural activities.

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