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Breakfast Today I learnt an article that it is about breakfast. As we all know, most people around the world are in the habit of eatting 3 meals since long years ago. But nowadays, becase we often in the hustle and bustle , many people miss their breakfast. That's not good. Not only is breakfast is very import meal of a day, it is also to eat at the right time as well. They say, the timing of breakfast might affect one's performance at work or in school. For instance,people who eatting breakfast 30 minutes before at work ,then they might do far better than others who eatting nothing. So we living in this cutthroat society,and have to meet many challenges. If we don't get enough energy for our body, how shall we stand a chance when it comes? Are you guys in the habit of breakfast?

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Breakfast

Today I learnt read an article that it is was about breakfast. As we all know, most people around the world are in the habit of eating 3 three meals since long many years ago. But nowadays, because we often in the hustle and bustle, many people miss their breakfast. That's not good. Not only is breakfast is a very important meal of a the day, it is also to eat at the right time the right time to eat as well. They say, the timing of breakfast might affect one's performance at work or in school. For instance, people who eating eat breakfast 30 minutes before at work, then they might do far better than others who eating eat nothing.
So we living live in this cut-throat society, and have to meet many challenges. If we don't get enough energy for our body, how shall we stand a chance when it comes?
Are you guys in the habit of eating breakfast?

Nice writing Travis Ma. A couple of notes...

Usually with numbers 1-9, we write the word (one, two, three, etc.). After that we write the number (10, 11, 12, 13, etc.) There are exceptions and variations of this of course but it's a good basic rule to know. 

You are talking about eating in general, like a habit that happens everyday, so you want to use the present simple.

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Breakfast

Today I learnt read an article that it is  about breakfast.

As we all know, most people around the world have had the habit of eating 3 meals a day for many years. are in the habit of eatting 3 meals since long years ago. 

But nowadays, because of the hustle and bustle of modern living we often in the hustle and bustle, many people miss their breakfast. That's not good.

Not only is breakfast is a very important meal of a day, It is also important to eat at breakfast at the right time. as well.They say,  since the timing of breakfast might affect one's performance at work or in school.

For instance, people who eatting breakfast 30 minutes before at work  then they might do far better than others who eatting ate nothing. 

So we Living in today's cutthroat society, and have to requires meeting many challenges. If we don't get enough energy for our body, how shall we stand a chance when it  they comes?

Are you guys in the habit of eating breakfast?

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