akiho's notebook entry: Apr 25, 2011
Hello! My name is akiho! nice to meet you.
i want go to america. because i studing for english.
my favolite singer is lady gaga ,michael jackson,taylor swift,katy perry,justinbieber,miley cyrusand rihana. thank you for my talk.
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akiho's notebook entry: Apr 25, 2011
Hello! My name is Akiho! Nice to meet you.
I would like to go to America, because I am studying English.
my favolite arists are Lady Gaga, Michael Jackson, Taylor Swift, Katy Perry, Justin Bieber, Miley Cyrus, and Rihana. Thank you for this talk.
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Nice to meet you to? xD sorry. I really don't know what to do here at this magical place. so i just browsing people's profiles! HI!!
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akiho's notebook entry: Apr 25, 2011
Hello! My name is Akiho! Nice to meet you. (Akiho only needs to be capitalized if it's your name, it doesn't if it's just your screen name.)I want go to America because I am studying English. (deleted "for")
My favorite singers are Lady Gaga, Michael Jackson, Taylor Swift, Katy Perry, Justin Bieber, Miley Cyrus and Rihanna. Thank you for reading.
Keep up the good work! Pay attention to things that need capitalization. The starting letter of every single sentence should be capitalized. Also, names need to be capitalized, both when they are naming a place and when they are naming a person.
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You have a lot of favorite singers :)
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