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Ramon Costa
English in my life Hello everybody, I'll talk about the reason to learn English. When I was a child I enjoyed listening English music, it was beautiful for me, but I didn't understand nothing, and I developed a wish for English, as well as I couldn't pay to study English, many years after, when I get work, I decided to learn about it. Since the moment I started English course, I have loved it more and more. I study English just to get knowledge and meet friends as well. English is like a hobby for me. If I committed some mistakes in my composition, please help me, everyone that read this entry, give me a note.
2016년 12월 25일 오후 10:46
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English in my life

Hello everybody, I'll talk about my the reason to for learning English. When I was a child I enjoyed listening to English music, to me it was beautiful for me, but I didn't understand noanything, and I developed a desire wish for English, as well as  but I couldn't pay to study English.  Many years later after, when I get started work, I decided to learn about it. Since the moment I started an English course, I have loved it more and more. I study English just to get knowledge and to meet friends as well. English is like a hobby for me. If I have committed some mistakes in my composition, please help me. Everyone that reads this entry, give send me a note.
2016년 12월 26일
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English in my life

Hello everybody, I'll talk about the reason I want to learn English. When I was a child I enjoyed listening to English music,.  It was beautiful for me, but I didn't understand anything, and I developed a wish to learn English. Because I couldn't pay to study English, many years later, when I got work, I decided to learn about it. Since the moment I started an English course, I have loved it more and more. I study English just to get knowledge and meet friends as well. English is like a hobby for me. If I commit some mistakes in my composition, please help me.  Everyone that read this entry, send me a note.
2017년 1월 31일
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English in my life

Hello everybody, I'll talk about the (my) reason to of learning English. When I was a child I enjoyed  used to enjoy listening English music, it was beautiful for me, but I didn't understand nothing  anything, and I developed  made a wish for English, ('I had the willingness to learn English' is better for what you wanted to say) as well as  but I couldn't pay to for study English. Many years after later,  when I get started to work, I decided to learn about it. Since the moment I started to follow an English course, and I have loved it more and more. I study English just to get (acquire) knowledge and meet with new (or make new )friends as well. English is like a hobby for me. If I committed some mistakes in my composition, please help me, everyone that who reads this entry, give me a note.


red is for mistakes

blue is for make the sentence better.

Good job Ramon !:)

Feliz Natal !

2016년 12월 25일
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