About my studying
I have been studied English for ten years at school, but I know it very bad. I like English and I want to learn this language, but I need help.
My name is Masha, I'm 16 years old. I study at the lyceum. I'm interested in chemistry and math. I have got a lot of this lessons. Unfortunately, I haven't got so much English lessons. But I like my lyceum, here is wonderful atmosphere. Students and teachers always ready to help you. Everyone is kind, talented and interesting person. I don't like just one teacher.
We organize different events every week. For example, movie and book days, subject's weeks and the other. Few days ago we organize the day of hugs.
I hope that it is possible to understand what did I want to say. I'm waiting for your help very much!
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About my studying
I have been studying English for ten years at school, but I know it is very good. I like English and I want to learn this language, but I need help.My name is Masha, I'm 16 years old. I study at the lyceum. I'm interested in chemistry and math. I have many of these lessons. Unfortunately, I do not have so many English lessons. But I like my lyceum. Here is a wonderful atmosphere. Students and teachers are always ready to help you. Everyone is kind, talented and interesting. I don't like just one teacher.
We organize different events every week. For example, movie and book days, subject's weeks etc. A few days ago we organized a day of hugs.
I hope that it is possible to understand what I wanted to say. I'm waiting very much for your help!
Very well written!
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About my studying
I have been studying English for ten years at school, but I know I'm very bad. I like English, and I want to learn this language, but I need help.My name is Masha and I'm 16 years old. I study at the lyceum. I'm interested in chemistry and maths. I have got a lot of these lessons. Unfortunately, I haven't got so many English lessons. But I like my lyceum, it has a wonderful atmosphere. Students and teachers are always ready to help you. Everyone is kind, talented and interesting person. There is I don't like just one teacher that I don't like.
We organize different events every week. For example, movie and book days, subject's weeks and the others. A few days ago we organized a day of hugs!
I hope that it is possible to understand what I'm wanting to say. I'm waiting for your help very much!
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You write English quite well, and write sentences fluidly. You just have a few problems with grammar, but nothing very big.
Good luck in your learning! ^_^
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