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My day In the morning, I woke up at 7 o'clock but I want to sleep more because I was very tired. Twenty minutes later, I got up and I took a shower. Then I got dressed quickly with blue jeans, gray t-shirt and black boots. I went down the steps to my kitchen and I drank a cup of quinoa with milk, my mom had prepared it. Then I go to work in an office. There I was doing structural plans in AutoCad and I was learning Revit, a program to make structures in 3D. Afterwards I went to eat in a nearby restaurant with my friends. Finally I returned to my house and I read a book while I drank a cup of coffee and caressed mi cat.

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My day

In the morning, I woke up at 7 o'clock but I wanted to sleep more because I was very tired.
Twenty minutes later, I got up and I took a shower. Then I got dressed quickly with in blue jeans, a gray t-shirt and black boots.
I went down the steps to my kitchen and I drank a cup of quinoa with milk, my mom had prepared it.
Then I go went to work in an office. There I was doing structural plans in AutoCad and I was learning Revit, a program to make structures in 3D.
Afterwards I went to eat in a nearby restaurant with my friends.
Finally I returned to my house and I read a book while I drank a cup of coffee and caressed mimy cat.

You did an AMAZING job.  Just a few minor errors.  Well done!

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