A fishy tale

A business man was walking on the beach with his dog, when his mobile phone fell in the water and a wave took it into the sea. A week later a fisherman on his boat was catching fish to sell at the market. When he finished fishing he returned home. While he was cleaning the fish he noticed something inside a cod fish, it was a mobile phone. It was very smelly and dirty but it still worked. The fisherman started to call some numbers. The businessman was in a phone shop, when the his girl friend's mobile phone rang. She said "it's for you, it's your number." The fisherman told the businessman how he found the phone. The next day he returned the phone to the businessman. He still uses that phone today.

A Fishy Tale

A businessman was walking on the beach with his dog when his mobile phone fell into the water and a wave took it out to sea. A week later a fisherman on his boat was catching fish to sell to market. When he finished, he returned home. While he was cleaning the fish he noticed something inside a cod; it was a mobile phone. It was very smelly and dirty but it still worked. The fisherman started to call some numbers. The businessman was in a phone shop, when the his girlfriend's mobile phone rang. She said "it's for you, it's your number." The fisherman told the businessman that he had found the phone. The next day he returned the phone to the businessman who still uses it.

Very well written! I smell a fish!

A fishy tale

A business man was walking on the beach with his dog, when his mobile phone fell on in the water and a wave took it into the sea. A week later a fisherman on his boat was catching the fish for sell to the market to sell at the market. When he finished the fishing he returned at home. While he was cleaning the fish he noticed something inside a cod fish,. It was a mobile cell phone. It was very smelly and dirty but it still worked. The fisherman started to call some numbers. The businessman was in a phone shop, when the his girl friend's mobile cell phone rang. She said it's for you, it's your number. The fisherman told to the businessman about how he found the phone. The next day he returned the phone to the businessman. He still uses it.

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A fishy tale

A business man was walking on the beach with his dog, (no comma needed her) when his mobile phone fell on (in or into, not on) the water and a wave took it into the sea (the idiom is "out to sea"). A week later a fisherman on his boat was catching the (unlike in Italian, sometimes the preposition/aritcle are not needed. If you want to specify an unknown quantity of fish, you could use "some fish") fish for (to sell) sell to the market. When he finished the (when he finished fishing. We don't use articles in English as much as are used in Italian) fishing he returned at (returned home) home. While he was cleaning the fish  ("a" fish would be better here, because "the fish" can either imply the plural fish, since the plural of "fish" is "fish," or a single fish) he noticed something inside a cod fish (this is not needed at all if "the fish" were changed to "a fish" earlier, since we would now know he was referring to a single fish), (Also, not a comma, but a colon here. "...he noticed something inside: a mobile phone." it was a mobile phone. It was very smelly and dirty but it still worked. The fisherman started to call some numbers. The businessman was in a phone shop, when the his girl friend's mobile phone rang. She said it's for you, it's your number. The fisherman told to (no preposition needed here. It's like "ha detto l'uomo d'affari" in Italia) the businessman about (that) he found the phone. The next day he (the fisherman) returned the phone to the businessman. He still uses it.(In these last 2 sentences, the pronouns "he" is confusing, because we don't know which man is being referred to. I would rewrite as: "The next day the fisherman returned the phone to the businessman, who still uses it to this day."

These are easy fixes to learn. Great story!

A Fishy Tale

A business man businessman was walking on the beach with his dog, when his mobile phone fell into on the water and a wave took  carried it out into the sea. A week later, a fisherman on his boat obviously on a boat, what else? was catching the fish for  to sell to in the market. When he finished the fishing After his catch, he returned at home. While  As he was cleaning the fish he noticed something inside a  the cod fish.  It was a that mobile phone. It was very smelt badly and looked dirty but it still worked. The fisherman started to call some numbers. The businessman was in a phone shop, when the his girl friend's mobile phone rang. She said, "It's for you. It's your number!" It would be better as storytelling to say, "It's your phone calling you" for more dramatic effect. The fisherman told to the businessman about that he had found the businessman's phone. The next day he returned the phone back to him.  To this day,  the businessman. He still uses it.