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Well done! 

Note: When I read "Nosotros reparamos una bomba y un problema con mi camión" I see two different problems, is this correct? Or the problem was the truck´s bomb? 

Disculpame por mi inglés!

Saludos!

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Yo tengo una lista en mi negocio de muchas cosas que necesito hacer. Me gustan los días cuando me siento que muchas de estas cosas fueron cumplido  ("cumplidas"/ maybe "realizadas" would be better BUT "cumplidas" it's ok) con éxito. Esto (Este) fue uno de estos (esos) días raros. 

Nosotros reparamos una bomba y una ("un", it's "EL problema") problema con mi camión. Pagamos unas cuentas y compramos señales nuevos ("nuevas", it's "LAS señales") para la cerca alredador el ("alredEdor del"; del = de + el) negocio. ¡Fue un buen día!

1) May I ask you, why was the day "raro"?  I'm asking this because when I got to that point of the text, it looked to me that something went not so good on this particular day. Like if everyday you usually get to accomplish all your tasks, but on this one you didn't. Then I kept reading and you say it was a good day. So my point is, that maybe you are mistaking the meaning of "raro", or maybe I'm not getting what you mean beacause I'm a little slow :P 

Just in case, "raro" on this context would give the impression that something was different than the other days. It would be like saying strange or something like that. If you want to say that this one was one of those days when you get to accomplish most of your tasks, maybe you could just say "Este fue uno de esos días", and that makes perfect refference to the prior description.

2) One comment about the subjects: in Spanish it's not neccesary to use the subjects explicitly everytime, in fact we don't usually do that. We just use the conjugated verb and by that you can know which the subject is. This is called "sujeto tácito" (tacit subject) which means you don't need to put the subject to write/speak correctly. Don't get me wrong, it's not wrong to use the subjects everytime, it's just that it's not the "native way" to speak :P 

So, instead of "Yo tengo una lista...." you can say "Tengo una lista...". Instead of saying "Nosotros reparamos..." you can say "Reparamos..." and so on. I hope it's useful! 

Buenas noches Paúl: 

Te envío tu redacción con las correcciones sugeridas. Destaco con color azul las palabras que tienen errores de ortografía, con color verde las frases u oraciones que requieren mejoras en el estilo de redacción y con tachado las palabras o frases que sobran. Al lado de cada destacado, te escribo en negrillas correctamente la palabra o frase:  

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Quedo a tus órdenes. 

Atentamente: Éveñyn Álvarez