JUST A DIARY ON FEB.28TH
I want someone to correct my diary. Could you do that for me, please?JUST A DIARY ON FEB.28TH
At last, (yesterday night,) I quit my part-time jobs which I have been worked for about 4 years yesterday at night. I'm really sad so bad because I was excited to do my job. (I was also) Feeling so happy, though, as my boss gaves me some gift when just I went back home. Thank you guys so much for 4 years.
Notes: "yesterday at night" ----> "quit part time job" these two should be next to each other!
JUST A DIARY ON FEB.28TH
I want someone to correct my diary. Could you do that for me, please?JUST A DIARY ON FEB.28TH
At last, yesterday, at night, I quit my part-time jobs which I have been worked at for about 4 years yesterday at night. I'm really sad so bad because I was excited to do really liked my job. Feeling so happy, though, as my boss gave me some gifts just when I went back home. Thank you guys so much for 4 years.
One uses "excited" about a single experience usually or a new experience. "I was excited to go to my new job". Generally you don't get "excited" every day. I think its like わくわくする. You could say "I was motivated to do my job" but "I really liked my job" is probably what you want.
"gaves" isn't a word. "gives" is present perfect or something, I don't know, I'm not an english teacher. "He gave me a gift before I left." "He gives me a gift before I leave".
JUST A DIARY ON FEB.28TH
I want someone to correct my diary. Could you do that for me, please?JUST A DIARY ON FEB.28TH
At last, I quit my part-time jobs which I have been worked for about 4 years yesterday at night. I'm really sad so bad because I was excited to do my job. Feeling so happy, though, as my boss gaves me some gift when just I went back home. Thank you guys so much for 4 years.
Last night, I finally quit my part-time job after working there for approximately 4 years. It makes me feel sad because I really enjoyed my work. Just as I was leaving for home, my boss gave me a gift, which made me really happy. It's been a wonderful 4 years. Thank you, guys.
