my favorite season
i lile different season in diffenent places .
i like spring in my hometown , inner mongolia, where you can feel spring looming . you can see some sprouts growing in branch , you can see warm air thawing the ice in rivers.i like breeze in spring .
i like summer in north of china because its weather is nice and cool than south of china . there are lots of people leave their city where is very hot in summr for someplaces cool .
i like autumn. it is so spectacular when leaf fall down the floor from trees
i like winter . skiiing and hot pot and so on . i will stay home and appreciate snow outside .
there are my favoriate seasons it is all seasons!
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my favorite season
I like different seasons in different places.I like spring in my hometown, Inner Mongolia, where you can feel spring looming. "Looming" is generally bad, maybe just say "coming." You can see some sprouts growing in on a branch, you can see warm air thawing the ice in rivers. I like the breeze in spring .
I like summer in the North of China because its weather is nice and cooler than in the South of China. There are lots of people who leave their city where is very hot in summer for someplaces cool.
I like autumn. It is so spectacular when leaves fall down to the floor ground from the trees.
I like winter: skiing and hot pot and so on. I will stay home and appreciate the snow outside .
These are my favoriate seasons: it is all seasons!
Interesting ideas! It's true, different seasons have different good sides. Have you lived in many other places? What are the seasons like there?
Your biggest language problems are forgetting the articles "a" and "the" and not using any capital letters! Please use capital letters next time; even if the words are the same, it will feel much nicer. :)
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