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informal essay
This is the first time for me to write an essay at italki. I will take part in the entrance exams for postgraduate schools. So I want to practice my english and learn more professional knowledge. My dream is to be a nutritionist, because I want to help more people to be healthy. I will study hard to make my dream come true.
2017년 3월 25일 오후 1:37
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informal essay
This is the first time that I'm writing an essay on (at implies that italki is a physical location) italki. I will take part in the entrance exams for graduate schools, so I want to practice my english and professional knowledge (what do you mean by practice your professional knowledge? Studying? Applying the knowledge?). My dream is to be a nutritionist because I want to help more people to live a healthy life. I will study hard to make my dream come true.Nice work for your first entry! Don't forget to put a space between periods/commas and the next word.Good luck on your exams!
2017년 3월 25일
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