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My vacation in Asgard. Correction! I'm living a dream. I'm on vacation in Asgard. I'm with Thor and Loki. We are in the palace's Odin. We're looking for the Mjolnir, drinking much beer and talking about the Thor's plans for keep Midgard always save. I'm wearing a dark yellow dress, a silver nacklace, a brown jacket and brown high heel shoes. Thor is wearing gray pants, a red T-shirt, a black belt and black shoes. Loki is wearing dark green pants, a green and golden T-shirt, black shoes and a golden belt. That is the best vacation of my life.

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My vacation in Asgard. Correction!

I'm living a dream! I'm on vacation in Asgard!


I'm with Thor and Loki. We are in Odin's the palace's Odin. We're looking for the Mjolnir, drinking much beer, and talking about the Thor's plans for always keeping Midgard always save safe.

I'm wearing a dark yellow dress, a silver necklace, a brown jacket, and brown high-heel shoes.
Thor is wearing gray pants, a red t-shirt, a black belt, and black shoes. Loki is wearing dark green pants, a green and golden t-shirt, black shoes, and a golden belt.

That This (<--Use "this" since you are currently on this vacation.) is the best vacation of my life!

Hi Jéssica! I love how you wrote this. I can feel your excitement in your words. Wonderfully done! Enjoy Asgard while you can! =)

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