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Let's talk about the Tang Dynasty Tang Dynasty is regarded by historians as the highest points in Chinese civilization.Tang Dynasty's capital is Chang'an.Stimulated by the contact with India and the Middle East, the empire saw a great development in many fields. The Tang Dynasty was the golden age of art and literature Tang Dynasty select the best Confucian literati all around the country to work for the government through civil service examinations,And Tang Dynasty's system was gradually perfected under the support of Confucian bureaucratic.By the middle of the eight century A.D.,the power of Tang Dynasty began to ebb.
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Let's talk about the Tang Dynasty

Tang Dynasty is regarded by historians as the highest points peak in Chinese civilization.Tang Dynasty's capital is Chang'an. Stimulated by the contact Driven by its interactions with India and the Middle East, the empire saw great developments in many fields. The Tang Dynasty saw the golden age of art and literature.
Tang Dynasty mandates select the best Confucian literati all around the country to work for the government through civil service examinations. Furthermore, Tang Dynasty's system was gradually perfected under the support of Confucian bureaucracy.By the middle of the eight century A.D.,the power of Tang Dynasty began to ebb.

Hi Lande,

A well written piece here. I've done minimal corrections for you. 

Cheers,

Lance 

2017년 5월 13일

Let's talk about the Tang Dynasty

Corrected: The Tang Dynasty is viewed by historians as the highest point in Chinese civilization. The Tang Dynasty's capital was Chang'an. Stimulated by contact with India and the Middle East, the empire saw great development in many fields. The Tang Dynasty was a golden age for art and literature 
The Tang Dynasty used civil service examinations to select the best Confucian literati from all over the country to work for the government; and the Tang Dynasty's system of government was gradually perfected through the support of its Confucian bureaucracy. By the middle of the eighth century A.D., the power of the Tang Dynasty began to ebb.

original: Tang Dynasty is regarded by historians as the highest points in Chinese civilization.Tang Dynasty's capital is Chang'an.Stimulated by the contact with India and the Middle East, the empire saw a great development in many fields. The Tang Dynasty was the golden age of art and literature 
Tang Dynasty select the best Confucian literati all around the country to work for the government through civil service examinations,And Tang Dynasty's system was gradually perfected under the support of Confucian bureaucratic.By the middle of the eight century A.D.,the power of Tang Dynasty began to ebb.

2017년 5월 13일
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