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The rain
It's rainning again now.I am not sure whether or not I like rainning.It seems that everything in the world getting quiet as it rains and I couldn't feel anything except the rain.Maybe I become dull.I don't know how the weather affect human's emotion.That's what I feel.
I think people should like the rain much more in summer as it could makes the air cooler and it doesn't matter you are into the rain because you become dry soon.Everything looks fresh as been washed.Welcome to a new world when the rain stops,even eyes been washed.You would see the rainbow if luckily.It makes me think of a poem by William Wordsworth,the Daffodils.It says, when on my couch I lie,in vacant or in a positive mood,they flash upon that inward eye,which is the bliss of solitude,and then my heart with pleasure fills,and dances with the daffodils.
It seems that I like rain.However,I like it at this time.By the way,the heavy rain will come these two days according to the weather report.
2017년 5월 15일 오전 1:47
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The rain
It's now raining again now. I am not sure whether or not if I like or dislike the rainning. It seems that everything in the world is getting quiet as it rains, and I couldn't feel anything except the rain. Maybe I become dull. I don't know how the weather affect the human's emotions. That's what I feel.I think people should like the rain much more in summer as it makes the air cooler, and it doesn't matter if you are into the rain because you will become dry soon. Everything looks fresh as been when washed. Welcome to a new world when the rain stops, even the eyes have been washed. Luckily, you will see the rainbow if luckily. It makes me think of a poem written by William Wordsworth, The Daffodils. It says, "when on my couch I lie, in vacant or in a positive mood, they flash upon that inward eye, which is the bliss of solitude, and then my heart with pleasure fills, and dances with the daffodils."
It seems that I like the rain. However, I like it at this time. By the way, the heavy rain will come in two days according to the weather report / forecast.
PS: Good job!
2017년 5월 15일
The rain
It's raining again now. I am not sure whether or not I like the rain. It seems that everything in the world gets quiet as it rains and I can't feel anything except the rain. Maybe I've become dull. I don't know how the weather affects human emotion. That's what I feel.I think people should like the rain much more in summer, as it makes the air cooler and it doesn't matter if you are in the rain because you become dry soon. Everything looks fresh as though been washed. Welcome to a new world when the rain stops, even eyes been washed. You will/can see a rainbow if you're lucky. It makes me think of a poem by William Wordsworth: the Daffodils. It says, when on my couch I lie, in a vacant or positive mood, they flash upon that inward eye, which is the bliss of solitude, and then my heart with pleasure fills, and dances with the daffodils.
It seems that I like rain. I like it at this time, anyway. By the way, the heavy rain will come these two days according to the weather report.
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Nice Article,
Stephen :)
2017년 5월 15일
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