Describing my dog
I am always greeted by a beautiful friend, Steal - my dog when I come back home. She is a lovely Japanese breed and very popular over the world. Steal has a fluffy brown color that has a few white spots spread across her body and tail. She is just about 2 feet, so every time she walks, she will fall down and her stomach will quite touch the ground .She has two small long ears always hung downwards. Three strands of hair standing straight up on Steal’s head make her look very funny. Her two bright round black eyes outlined with thin black lashes are as deep as an ocean. She has a small nose with a big black dot on it. She uses her long tongue to lick and wags her tail whenever she want to shows love to others. Adding to her cute look, Steal is very active and likes to go out for a walk with me. After hard and serious studying at university, I feel very pleased because that pretty dog is always very delighted and often barks excitingly to welcome me to home.
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Describing my dog
I am always greeted by a beautiful friend, Steal - my dog when I come back home. She is a lovely Japanese breed and very popular all over the world. Steal has a fluffy brown coat that has a few white spots spread across her body and tail. She is just about 2 feet, so every time she walks, she will fall down and her stomach will quite touch the ground .She has two small but long ears which hang down. Three strands of hair standing straight up on Steal’s head make her look very funny. Her two bright round black eyes outlined with thin black lashes are as deep as an ocean. She has a small nose with a big black dot on it. She uses her long tongue to lick and wags her tail whenever she want to shows love to others. Adding to her cute look, Steal is very active and likes to go out for a walk with me. After hard and serious study at university, I feel very pleased because that pretty dog is always very delighted and often barks excitedly to welcome me to home.It's really good already, just a few minor changes!
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