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关于美人鱼的故事这是崘菻美人鱼。她居住在靠近菲律宾的太平洋深处。她讨厌热水，一直在寻找新的地方来度过她的日子。她认为这就是为什么她总是孤独。所有其他美人鱼喜欢炎热和阳光。但这只是一个谎言。她的年龄的其他美人鱼嫉妒她，因为林是公主。但不要为她感到遗憾。这不公平。崘菻的妹妹, 叀菻, 也是一个公主，她是最受欢迎的美人鱼 - 一个和蔼和漂亮的小女孩。很可爱。每个人都爱她。很难解释，但崘菻总是相信她比她们更好。她从来不想和其他美人鱼做同样的事情，如狩猎鱼和探索洞穴。随着时间的流逝，她变得非常孤独。这让她很伤心。如今她花了大部分时间观察海龟游泳。这就是她最喜欢做的事情。 This is mermaid Lun Lin. She lives in the deep Indic Ocean, close to the Philippines. She hates hot waters and always look for fresh places to pass her days. She believes that is why she is always alone. All the others mermaid love the hotness and the sun. But that is just a lie. The other mermaids of her age are jealous of her because Lun Lin is a princess. But don’t feel sorry for her. It is not unfair. Lin’s sister, Zhuan, is also a princess and she is the most popular mermaid – a nice little girl. Very adorable. Everybody loves her. It is hard to explain, but Lun Lin always looked to believe she was better than them. She never wanted to do the same other things with the other mermaids, as hunting fishing and exploring caves. With time, she became very lonely. That makes her sad. Nowadays she spends most of her time observing the turtles swimming. That is what she likes to do the most.

2017년 6월 2일 오후 8:22

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关于美人鱼的故事

这是崘菻美人鱼。她居住在靠近菲律宾的太平洋深处。她讨厌热水，一直在寻找新的地方来度过她的日子。她认为这就是为什么她总是孤独。所有其他的美人鱼喜欢炎热和阳光。但这只是一个谎言。她的年龄的同龄的其他美人鱼嫉妒她，因为林是公主。但不要为她感到遗憾。这不公平。崘菻的妹妹, 叀菻, 也是一个公主，她是最受欢迎的美人鱼 - 一个和蔼和漂亮的小女孩。很可爱。每个人都爱她。很难解释，但崘菻总是相信她比她们更好。她从来不想和其他美人鱼做同样的事情，如狩猎捕鱼和探索洞穴。随着时间的流逝，她变得非常孤独。这让她很伤心。如今她花了大部分时间观察海龟游泳。这就是她最喜欢做的事情。

This is mermaid Lun Lin. She lives in the deep Indic Ocean, close to the Philippines. She hates hot waters and always look for fresh places to pass her days. She believes that is why she is always alone. All the others mermaid love the hotness and the sun. But that is just a lie. The other mermaids of her age are jealous of her because Lun Lin is a princess. But don’t feel sorry for her. It is not unfair. Lin’s sister, Zhuan, is also a princess and she is the most popular mermaid – a nice little girl. Very adorable. Everybody loves her. It is hard to explain, but Lun Lin always looked to believe she was better than them. She never wanted to do the same other things with the other mermaids, as hunting fishing and exploring caves. With time, she became very lonely. That makes her sad. Nowadays she spends most of her time observing the turtles swimming. That is what she likes to do the most.

2017년 6월 3일

关于美人鱼的故事

这是崘菻美人鱼。她居住在靠近菲律宾的太平洋深处。她讨厌热水，一直在寻找新的地方来度过她的日子。她认为这就是为什么她总是感到孤独。所有其他美人鱼都喜欢炎热和阳光。但这只是一个谎言。她的年龄（用“和她同样年龄”更好）的其他美人鱼嫉妒她，因为林是公主。但不要为她感到遗憾。这不公平。崘菻的妹妹, 叀菻, 也是一个公主，她是最受欢迎的美人鱼 - 一个和蔼和漂亮的小女孩。很可爱。每个人都爱她。很难解释，但崘菻总是相信她比她们更好。她从来不想和其他美人鱼做同样的事情，如狩猎鱼和探索洞穴。随着时间的流逝，她变得非常孤独。这让她很伤心。如今她花了大部分时间观察海龟游泳。这就是她最喜欢做的事情。

This is mermaid Lun Lin. She lives in the deep Indic Ocean, close to the Philippines. She hates hot waters and always look for fresh places to pass her days. She believes that is why she is always alone. All the others mermaid love the hotness and the sun. But that is just a lie. The other mermaids of her age are jealous of her because Lun Lin is a princess. But don’t feel sorry for her. It is not unfair. Lin’s sister, Zhuan, is also a princess and she is the most popular mermaid – a nice little girl. Very adorable. Everybody loves her. It is hard to explain, but Lun Lin always looked to believe she was better than them. She never wanted to do the same other things with the other mermaids, as hunting fishing and exploring caves. With time, she became very lonely. That makes her sad. Nowadays she spends most of her time observing the turtles swimming. That is what she likes to do the most.

2017년 6월 3일

关于美人鱼的故事

这是美人鱼崘菻(we intend to put the name after the title)。她居住在靠近菲律宾的太平洋深处。她讨厌热水，一直在寻找新的地方来度过她的日子。她认为这就是为什么她总是孤独。所有其他美人鱼喜欢炎热和阳光。但这只是一个谎言。和她同龄的其他美人鱼嫉妒她，因为林是公主。但不要为她感到遗憾。这并非不公平。崘菻的妹妹, 叀菻, 也是一个公主，她是最受欢迎的美人鱼 - 一个和蔼和漂亮的小女孩。很可爱。每个人都爱她。这很难解释，但崘菻总是相信她比她们更好。她从来不想和其他美人鱼做同样的事情，如捕鱼和探索洞穴。随着时间的流逝，她变得非常孤独。这让她很伤心。如今她花大部分时间观察海龟游泳。这就是她最喜欢做的事情。

This is mermaid Lun Lin. She lives in the deep Indic Ocean, close to the Philippines. She hates hot waters and always look for fresh places to pass her days. She believes that is why she is always alone. All the others mermaid love the hotness and the sun. But that is just a lie. The other mermaids of her age are jealous of her because Lun Lin is a princess. But don’t feel sorry for her. It is not unfair. Lin’s sister, Zhuan, is also a princess and she is the most popular mermaid – a nice little girl. Very adorable. Everybody loves her. It is hard to explain, but Lun Lin always looked to believe she was better than them. She never wanted to do the same other things with the other mermaids, as hunting fishing and exploring caves. With time, she became very lonely. That makes her sad. Nowadays she spends most of her time observing the turtles swimming. That is what she likes to do the most.

2017년 6월 3일

我感觉自己不能完全读懂你的故事(里面的逻辑)，崘菻孤独的原因到底是什么?大家为什么要孤立她，而不孤立同是公主的叀菻?

2022년 3월 13일

关于美人鱼的故事

这是崘菻美人鱼。她居住在靠近菲律宾的太平洋深处。她讨厌热水，一直在寻找新的地方来度过她的日子。她认为这就是为什么她总是孤独。所有其他美人鱼喜欢炎热和阳光。但这只是一个谎言。她的年龄的其他美人鱼嫉妒她，因为林是公主。但不要为她感到遗憾。这不公平。崘菻的妹妹, 叀菻, 也是一个公主，她是最受欢迎的美人鱼 - 一个和蔼和漂亮的小女孩。很可爱。每个人都爱她。很难解释，但崘菻总是相信她比她们更好。她从来不想和其他美人鱼做同样的事情，如狩猎鱼和探索洞穴。随着时间的流逝，她变得非常孤独。这让她很伤心。如今她花了大部分时间观察海龟游泳。这就是她最喜欢做的事情。

This is mermaid Lun Lin. She lives in the deep Indic Ocean, close to the Philippines. She hates hot waters and always look for fresh places to pass her days. She believes that is why she is always alone. All the others mermaid love the hotness and the sun. But that is just a lie. The other mermaids of her age are jealous of her because Lun Lin is a princess. But don’t feel sorry for her. It is not unfair. Lin’s sister, Zhuan, is also a princess and she is the most popular mermaid – a nice little girl. Very adorable. Everybody loves her. It is hard to explain, but Lun Lin always looked to believe she was better than them. She never wanted to do the same other things with the other mermaids, as hunting fishing and exploring caves. With time, she became very lonely. That makes her sad. Nowadays she spends most of her time observing the turtles swimming. That is what she likes to do the most.

她的年龄的，可以改成：她这么大的，或者：和她岁数差不多的

林，改成“菻” 或者“崘菻”，前后一致，才好不造成歧义。

2020년 7월 27일

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