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My presentation. i am system analyst, i studied in Duoc Uc and now i have a little company with my friend. The company is of technology of information and loans services of support to other companies. In my free time i play guitar, practic skateboarding, make programs, going party with my friends and in the summer i travel for some place doing autostop. this other year i have planed a travel, by east coast of USA, for learn english, going skate and going to some party. - - - - - If someone can help me to correct this text, would of the great help for me. thank.

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My presentation.

I am system analyst: I studied in Duoc Uc and now i have a little company with my friend. The company provides technology of information technology and loans services of support to other companies.

In my free time i play guitar, practice skateboarding, make programs, going to parties with my friends and in the summer i travel by hitchhiking for some place doing autostop.

this other year i have planned to travel, by the east coast of USA, for to learn english, going skate and going to some party. and party.

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If someone can help me to correct this text, would of the great help for me.

thank.

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