hi !!!
my name is luis
i am from nuevo laredo
twenty three year old
my goals are learn inglish
i am learning inglish because i need in my school
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hi !!!
my name is luisI am from nuevo laredo
I am twenty three years-old
my goals are to learn inglish
I am learning English because I need it for school.
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Hi Luis! I think you didn't get any corrections because you posted this in the Spanish section, but there are some corrections for you. Hope it helps you! :D
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hi !!!
My name is Luis.I am from Nuevo Laredo and I am twenty-three year old
My goal is to learn English.
I am learning English because I need it for school.
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Hi Luis!
Pretty good job introducing yourself. Just be careful with capitalization and spelling :)
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