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Just walking... Hello! As I had some free time today, I decided to go out for walking. I met my friend as I was walking to the Central City Park. We've not seen each other for a long time, and we decided to walk together. Just as we got in the park, the rain started, so we had to go to a cafe, so that to drink something. We had coffee as it's raining outside. He told me that he got married and he's going to go to Australia soon, so that to live there. So, I was glad to see him, and I came back home just as the rain stopped.
2017년 9월 21일 오후 10:52
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Just walking...

Hello!
As I had some free time today, I decided to go out for walking. I met my friend as I was walking to the Central City Park. We've not seen each other for a long time, and we decided to walk together. Just as we got in the park, the rain started, so we had to go to a cafe, so that to drink something. We had coffee as it's raining outside. He told me that he got married and he's going to go to Australia soon, so that to live there.
So, I was glad to see him, and I came back home just as the rain stopped.


For - you either 'go out walking' or you 'go for a walk'

so that to drink something - This should be "to get something to drink"
2017년 9월 22일
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Hello!

As I had some free time today, I decided to go out for walking. I met my friend as I was walking to the Central City Park. We've not seen each other for a long time, and we decided to walk together. Just as we got in the park, the rain started it started raining, so we had to go to a cafe, so that to drink something and had something to drink. We had coffee as it was raining outside. He told me that he got married and he's going to go to Australia soon, so that to live there.
I was glad to see him, and I came back home just as the rain stopped.
2017년 9월 21일
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