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One day I have visited a beautiful city Sochi. Mountains, perfect views and nature were have been really awesome here! I came here to ride on a snowboard and had a relax after hard work year. Sochi is a very expensive resort and I was spend a lot of money. I rested with my uncle and it was very fun. We had been visiting to the casino, different bars and drunk a good beer there. I like mountains and a lot of snow so much. I have spent my weekend perfectly and I definitely will visit Sochi again.
2017년 9월 26일 오전 5:09
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Sochi
One day I have visited a beautiful city Sochi. Mountains, perfect views and nature were have been really awesome here! I came here to ride on a snowboard and had a relax after hard work year. Sochi is a very expensive resort and I was spend a lot of money. I rested with my uncle and it was very fun. We had been visiting to the casino, different bars and drunk a good beer there. I like mountains and a lot of snow so much. I have spent my weekend perfectly and I definitely will visit Sochi again. (in blue = grammatically it's correct but there is a better way of saying it)Correction:
I once visited a beautiful city called Sochi. The view, nature and mountains were really awesome! I came here to ride on a snowboard and to relax after a year of hard work. Sochi is a very expensive resort and I spent a lot of money there. I stayed with my uncle and it was very fun. We went to visit the casino, different bars and drink (infinitive form because "we went to + visit + drink) good beer there. I like mountains and snow so much. My weekend was well-spent and I definitely will visit Sochi again.
молодец!! :)
2017년 9월 26일
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