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Please help me to correct my sentences. (Грамматика и правильность перевода) 1. Natasha wants to follow in her father's footsteps and become a journalist. (Наташа хочет пойти по стопам своего отца и стать журналистом) 2. When I was choosing a future profession, I was influenced by famous book of Yrii German about doctors (Когда я выбирал себе будущую профессию, на меня повлияла известная книга Юрия Германа о врачах) 3. The fireman’s work requires great courage (Работа пожарных требует большого мужества) 4. Nobody likes exhausting monotonous work, but it also need to be doing. (Никто не любит изнуряющую монотонную работу, но ее тоже необходимо делать) 5. Computers allow people of some professions to work at home (Компьютеры позволяют людям некоторых профессий работать дома) 6. My older brother is good in math. But he doesn’t decide which profession to choose. (Моему брату хорошо дается математика. Но он не решил, какую профессию выбрать) 7. My parents are encouraging my desire to become a fashion designer. It is fulfilling, creative and rewarding job. (Мои родители поощряют мое желание стать модельером. Это приносящая удовольствие, творческая и благодарная работа). 8. I find the work of the travel agency employees creative and quite prestigious. (Я нахожу работу сотрудников бюро путешествий творческой и достаточно престижной) 9. My uncle is a baker, and this occupation requires a night shift. Everyone says that I have a penchant for drawing. (Мой дядя – пекарь, а это занятие требует работы в ночную смену) 10. I think that I will follow the advice of friends and become an architect or interior designer. (Думаю, что я последую совету друзей и стану архитектором или дизайнером интерьера)
2017년 10월 2일 오후 7:50
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Very well done! 1. Correct. 2. When I was choosing a future profession, I was influenced by a famous book of Yrii German's about doctors. (better: I was influenced by Yrii German's famous book about doctors.) 3. Correct. 4. Nobody likes exhausting monotonous work, but it also has to be done. 5. Computers allow people with some professions to work at home. 6. My older brother is good in math. But he hasn't decided which profession to choose. 7. My parents are encouraging my desire to become a fashion designer. It is a fulfilling, creative and rewarding job. 8. I find the work of travel agency employees creative and quite prestigious. 9. My uncle is a baker, and this occupation requires working nights. 10. Correct.
2017년 10월 2일

Please help me to correct my sentences. (Грамматика и правильность перевода)

1. Natasha wants to follow in her father's footsteps and become a journalist. (Наташа хочет пойти по стопам своего отца и стать журналистом)
2. When I was choosing a future profession, I was influenced by Yrii German's famous book about doctors (Когда я выбирал себе будущую профессию, на меня повлияла известная книга Юрия Германа о врачах)
3. A/the fireman’s work requires great courage (Работа пожарных требует большого мужества)
4. Nobody likes exhausting, monotonous work, but it also needs to be done. (Никто не любит изнуряющую монотонную работу, но ее тоже необходимо делать)
5. Computers allow people of some professions to work at home.(Компьютеры позволяют людям некоторых профессий работать дома)
6. My older brother is good in math but he cannot decide which profession to choose. (Моему брату хорошо дается математика. Но он не решил, какую профессию выбрать)
7. My parents are encouraging my desire to become a fashion designer. It is a fulfilling, creative and rewarding job. (Мои родители поощряют мое желание стать модельером. Это приносящая удовольствие, творческая и благодарная работа).
8. I find the work of the employees at the travel agency creative and quite prestigious. (Я нахожу работу сотрудников бюро путешествий творческой и достаточно престижной)
9. My uncle is a baker and this occupation requires night-shifts.* Everyone says that I have a penchant for drawing. (Мой дядя – пекарь, а это занятие требует работы в ночную смену)
10. I think that I will follow the advice of friends and become an architect or interior designer. (Думаю, что я последую совету друзей и стану архитектором или дизайнером интерьера)

*or, requires a night-shift.

Very well written!

2017년 10월 2일
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