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Shoud we punish or correct prisoners? I believe that there are people who can be corrected and someone who can't. And we should give a second chance to someone who just was wrong and stumbled. And as for the others we should just isolate them from the society. I disagree that we should punish them and make them suffer. That just make them evil. For the ones who can be corrected we should make such conditions that can help them to correct. But there is a huge problem how to differentiate one from another. Nowadays we have no idea how could it be done. And I do believe that we should figure out how to do it.

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Should we punish or correct prisoners?

I believe that there are people who can be corrected and others *someone who can't. And we should give a second chance to someone those who just was made the wrong choice and stumbled. And as for the others, we should just isolate them from the society. I disagree that we should punish them and make them suffer. That would just make them evil. For the ones who can be corrected, we should make such create conditions that can help them to mend their ways correct. However, But there is a huge problem: how to differentiate between prisoners from these two categories one from another. Nowadays, we have no idea how could it could be done. And but I do believe that we should figure out how to do it.

* "someone" is an indefinite pronoun for a single person without any mention of their identity. Since there are many prisoners, I changed "someone" to "others". 

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