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My Traditional Chinese Hairpin Would you please help me to correct it? Recently I've been in trouble with my hair. That's because the southeast of China is too hot to put my hair down and my thick hair makes my bun very heavy, which is a burden to both my head and neck. Even so, I plan to keep my long hair for the cool winter is coming(usually, winter here is cool but cold ). To cope with it, I had tried a lot of ways before finally I found the Chinese Hairpin or, you can say, hair stick. Anyway, in Chinese it is called Fazan or Zanzi. It can disperse the stress caused by my hair when using it. For me, it is very useful than any rubber bands!(I can only show you the picture of Fazan because of the uploading limitation, otherwise I will give the picture about how to use it.)
2017년 10월 5일 오전 4:26
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My Traditional Chinese Hairpin

Would you please help me to correct it this?

Recently I've been in having trouble with my hair. That's because the southeast of China is too hot to put my hair down and my thick hair makes my bun very heavy, which is a burden to both my head and neck.
Even so, I plan to keep my long hair for since the cool winter is coming(usually, winter here is not cool but cold ).
To cope with it, I had tried a lot of ways before finally I finding the Chinese Hairpin, or you can also say call it a hair stick. Anyway, in Chinese it is called Fazan or Zanzi. It can disperse the stress caused by my hair when using it. For me, it is very useful even more than any rubber band!(I can only show you the picture of Fazan because of the uploading limitation, otherwise I would give the picture about showing how to use it.)
2017년 10월 5일
Thank you for your appreciation! Actually, you know nowadays every hairpin is like an artwork and some even have their own names just like people!@Sarah
2017년 10월 5일
What a lovely hairpin! I've always admired Chinese hairpins for some time, especially those from Chinese dramas. They're just simply elegant *-*
2017년 10월 5일
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