Isaac Newton

Isaac Newton is a well-known scientist who has written several scientific books. He discovered universal gravitation which helps scientists understand the tides. He studied the nature of light and invented the reflecting telescope. He also developed calculus which is a kind of mathematics.

He was born in 1642 in the Lincolnshire village of Woolsthorpe, and went to school in Grantham. He was not so smart when he was a kid. One day, he was punched by a schoolyard bully and fought back, then he determinded to change himself into an enthusiastic student.

He wrote a book named "Principia" in 1687, and the book had a significant influence on later research.

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Isaac Newton

Isaac Newton is a well-know scientist who is written in the scientic books. He found universal gravitation which helps scientists understand the tides. He studied the nature of the light and invented the telescope. He also developed calculus which is a kind of mathematics.

Isaac Newton was a well-known scientist, whose name is often mentioned in science books/ Isaac Newton was a well-known scientist and an author of several scientific books. He discovered the law of gravity, which he would later use to explain the motions of tide. He also studied the properties of light, which eventually led him to invent the telescope. He also discovered calculus, which is a branch of mathematics.

He was born in 1642 in the Lincolnshire village of Woolsthorpe and  went to school in Grantham. He was not <strike>so</strike> really very smart when he was a kid. One day, he was punched by a schoolyard bully in a fight, and from that day onwards,  <strike>and fought back, then</strike> he was determined  to transform himself into an enthusiastic student.

He wrote a book called Principia in 1687, and the book would have great significances to scientific research later on . has signifigent influence to afterward research.

Isaac Newton

Isaac Newton is a well-known scientist who wrote written in the scientific books. He found universal gravitation which helps scientists understand the tides. He studied the nature of the light and invented the telescope. He also developed calculus which is a kind branch of mathematics.

He was born in 1642 in the Lincolnshire village of Woolsthorpe, and went to school in Grantham. He was not so smart when he was a kid. One day, he was punched by a schoolyard bully in a schoolyard and fought back, then he was determined to (best the bully and became a diligent student).  change himself as a enthusiastic student.

He wrote a book named Principia in 1687, and the book has significant influence on afterward subsequent research.

Hi June, 

Your piece is well-written. I've just changed certain words to better reflect the context. I used the word "best" as a verb in one of the sentences to mean becoming better than the other party. 

Lance