Fitness Challenge!
Have you ever heard fitness challenge in Dubai? It is an event to encourage people to do sport which is announced by Hamdan bin Mohamed Al Maktoum, Crown Prince of Dubai. In the concept of the event throughout 1 month, there will be many outdoor activities like yoga, pilates, cycling or skydive! Moreover, many gymnasia collaborated with authority and they are giving a free lesson to attendees. If you want to challenge your friend, you have to download the app and add him/her as a friend. The app will measure your step number as usual fitness apps. You can also register yourself to classes or activities through the app. More registration or step will make you a winner.
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Fitness Challenge!
Have you ever heard of the fitness challenge in Dubai? It is an event to encourage people to do sport which is announced endorsed by Hamdan bin Mohamed Al Maktoum, Crown Prince of Dubai. In The concept of Throughout the one month long event throughout 1 month, there will be many outdoor activities like such as yoga, pilates, cycling or skydiving! Moreover, Many gymnasia gyms have collaborated with the authorities and they are giving to give a free lessons to attendees. If you want to challenge your friend, you have to download the app and add him/her as a friend. The app will measure your step number as usual like your usual fitness apps. You can also register yourself to for classes or activities through the app. More The most registrations or steps will make you a winner.Merhaba Nur, i hope you find the corrections useful. İ don't quite understand the meaning of your last sentence.
Announced is correct English but we use endorsed for this kind of article. Like is correct but such as makes the sentence flow well. İ don't particularly like use of the word collaborated as it is not always used positively but here it is still correct.
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Susan
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