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日本語の練習 ー1. There is a good athmosphere in the company: 会社の空気はいいです。 The population of the this little village is 1200 people: この田舎の小さな村の人口は1200人です。 The topic of today's conversation: 今日の会話のテーマ I learned english when I was a high-school student: 高校生時英語を勉強しまいました。 I like craft beer: 人口のビールが大好きです。(I guess this is wrong, in hungarian we use this expression for specal-unique craftbeers, which are not so common to find) This is not a forest, it is a built park: 森じゃないです, これは人口の公園です。 I'm learning new vocabulary, but it is hard to imagine the words in context and understand how japanese people would use it. I tried to write some practicing sentences. I'm happy for any correction!

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日本語の練習 ー1.

There is a good athmosphere in the company: 会社の空気雰囲気(ふんいき)はいいです。

The population of the this little village is 1200 people: この田舎の小さな村の人口は1200人です。

The topic of today's conversation: 今日の会話のテーマ

I learned english when I was a high-school student: 高校生の時英語を勉強しまいました。

I like craft beer: 人口のビール地ビールorクラフトビールが大好きです。(I guess this is wrong, in hungarian we use this expression for specal-unique craftbeers, which are not so common to find)

This is not a forest, it is a built park: 森じゃないです, これは人口人工の公園です。

I'm learning new vocabulary, but it is hard to imagine the words in context and understand how japanese people would use it. I tried to write some practicing sentences. I'm happy for any correction!

You did great job. I corrected a little. I think about  first one 会社の空気 or会社の雰囲気 are both Ok depends on the situation, but I prefer 雰囲気 in this situation.

Last one, you wrote人口means population, 人工means artificial or human-made. So you can also write これは人が作った公園です。

Hope this helps you. I admired your great efforts. 

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