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An article: Learning English My reasons for learning English I like to meet new people and learn about different cultures. The other reason, is because after my mom pass away, I have been struggle with anxiety and hard thoughts. So, English studies has been helped me a lot to put down my anxiety. I love to read books, and watch movies and I love too heard music all in English. Before be into English studies I used to waste a lot of time searching for a translation of everything, and it is so limited. Plus, English is the third language most talk in the word, and have a lot of information to learn. So, when I read some idea in a book, or when I heard something in the news, I building one idea about. But, if I don´t have any idea about the language is difficult or impossible, don´t?
2017년 11월 3일 오전 12:11
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An article: Learning English

My reasons for learning English

I like to meet new people and learn about different cultures.
The other reason, is because after my mom passed away, I have been struggle struggling with anxiety and hard negative thoughts. So, English studies has been have helped me a lot to put down decrease my anxiety.

I love to read books, and watch movies and I love too heard listen to music all in English. Before be into starting my English studies I used to waste a lot of time searching for a translation of everything, and it is so limited.

Plus, English is the third language most talk spoken language in the word, and have has a lot of information to learn.

So, when I read some idea in a book, or when I heard something in the news, I building one think of an idea about. But, if I don´t have any idea about the language,  it is difficult or impossible, don´t? isn't it?


Sorry to hear about your mum. Good luck with your English!


2017년 11월 3일
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An Article: Learning English {Main words in titles are capitalized in English composition}

My Reasons for Learning English

I like to meet new people and learn about different cultures. [1]
The other reason, is because that [2] after my mom passed away, I have been struggling with anxiety and hard difficult {or morbid} thoughts. So, English studies has been helping me a lot to put down temper {or control, lower, reduce} my anxiety.

I love to read books, and watch [3] movies, and I love too heard listening to music all in English. Before being into English studies, I used to waste a lot of time searching for a translation of for everything, and it is was [4] so limited.

Plus, English is the third most spoken language most talk in the world, and have a lot of information to learn. {to learn from?}

So, when I read some idea in a book, or when I heard something in the news, I am building [5] one an idea about it. But, if I don´t have any idea about the language, it is difficult or (even) impossible, don´t you think? {or "isn't it?"}


1. More natural: I like meeting new people and learning about...

2. The grammatically correct structure is: "the reason is that..." even though you sometimes hear people (even Anglophones) say "reason...because".

3. Same comment as [1] about the "xx-ing" form sounding more natural.

4. Refers to "before", so you need the past here.

5. Better: "forming an idea".

2017년 11월 3일
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