Two questions
Hi, there
Please, could you help me with these two questions? Please
1)
Do you say This month's agreement has reduced the risks of a nuclear conflict on the same scale as that of the Cold War? or This month's agreement has reduced the risks of a nuclear conflict on the same scale as that of the Cold War's? .. As that of the Cold War or As that of the Cold War's
2)
Do you say "Today my website expires. Goodbye teenage-named, incomplete, out of date web piece of me", or "(...) Goodbye incomplete, out of date, teenage-named web piece of me" or "(...) Goodybhe teenage-named incomplete out of date web piece of me"?
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1) Cold War is correct because the possessive of the Cold War is already stated.
2) Use the commas between the adjectives. The order does not matter most of the time.
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Hello there!
1. This month's agreement reduced the risks of a nuclear conflict whose scale would near that of the Cold War.
2. Goodbye incomplete and outdated "web me" with your teenage domain name.
I know they're a little different from the options you suggested, but these sound more natural.
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