The seasons
The seasons are four, the autumn is ahead of winter, and then comes the spring before the summer.
But the season I prefer is the winter, because snow comes down
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The seasons
The seasons are four, the autumn is ahead of winter, and then comes the spring before the summer.But the season I prefer is the winter, because snow comes down
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There are four seasons. Autumn comes before winter and spring before summer.
But the season I prefer is winter because the snow falls.
Very good job! I only made changes to the word order to make it sound more natural. English word order is generally opposite of the romance languages.
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The seasons
The seasons are four (There are four seasons), the autumn is ahead of winter and then comes the spring before the summer.But (However,) the season I prefer is the winter because snow comes down.
Hi Simona, your writing is quite good.
minor, (suggestions)
Good luck!
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American English Corrections
The Seasons (You need to capitalize the title correctly.)
There are four seasons. (This is the more natural way of saying it.) Autumn comes before winter. Spring comes after winter and is before summer. The season I prefer the most is winter, because snow comes down.
The Seasons (You need to capitalize the title correctly.)
There are four seasons. (This is the more natural way of saying it.) Autumn comes before winter. Spring comes after winter and is before summer. The season I prefer the most is winter, because snow comes down.
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I hate winter, my favotite is summer, I don't need to wear a lot of clothes, I feel free
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