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Birthday of my Father Hi guys, today I will talk about the birthday of my father and about my learn language of English, of course I know I make a mistake, but I need to do it for I improve my vocabulary. Alright, today is birthday of my father and we go to eat in a great restaurant, here in Brazil we have great restaurant and I love it. My father is doing 56 years old, we going in my car and my sister my mother my wife are going to. If I wrote any word or sentence wrong please let me know, I need to correct me. Thanks

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Birthday of my Father

Hi guys, today I will talk about the birthday of my dad and about learning English. Of course I know I will make a few mistakes, but I need to do it to improve my vocabulary. Alright, today is my father's birthday and we are going to eat in a great restaurant. Here in Brazil we have lots of great restaurants and I love it. Dad is turning 56 years old, and we are going in my car along with my sister,  my  mom, and my wife.



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My Father's Birthday*

Hi guys, today I will talk about my father's birthday and about my learn language of learning English. Of course I know I make a mistake will make mistakes, but I need to do it for I to improve my vocabulary. Alright, today is birthday of my father my father's birthday and we go to eat in we will go out to eat at a great restaurant. Here in Brazil we have a great restaurant and I love it. My father is doing turning 56 years old. We are going in my car, and my sister, my mother, and my wife are going to too.

If I wrote any words or sentences** wrong, please let me know. I need to correct me myself.

Thanks!


* A lot of times where you would say "A of B" in Portuguese, we would say "B's A" in English, like here. Also, "father" is okay here, since you're writing for people you don't know, but it's a bit formal, and most people would probably use a different word, like "dad".

** Saying "word" and "sentence" isn't wrong, but everyone I know would say "words" and "sentences" here.

Good work! I understood everything :) Happy birthday to your dad!

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