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Problems of tourism in my city. I'm from Málaga, Spain. Province of Malaga has "always" been a important touristic place in Spain while capital city was a important industrial city. A few years ago all changued, a lot of industries were closed and tourism have growed up to maximun. Nowadays, a lot of tourist choose Malaga to stay for holidays, center of city is always very crowded, a lot of companies set up with that. I can tell a lot of advantages about tourism but I prefer to tell about disvantages which tourism brings to Málaga. The most important problem is the expensive prices to rent a flat in the city, it's because owners prefer to rent their flats to tourist because they can pay more money for rent and their staying there is less problematic being that is temporal. Citizens of Malaga have to seek flats with a few offer and very expensive prices.

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Problems of tourism in my city.

I'm from Málaga, Spain. Province of Malaga has "always" been a important touristic place in Spain while capital city was a important industrial city. A few years ago all changued, a lot of industries were closed and tourism have growed up to maximun. Nowadays, a lot of tourist choose Malaga to stay for holidays, center of city is always very crowded, a lot of companies set up with that. I can tell a lot of advantages about tourism but I prefer to tell about disvantages which tourism brings to Málaga. The most important problem is the expensive prices to rent a flat in the city, it's because owners prefer to rent their flats to tourist because they can pay more money for rent and their staying there is less problematic being that is temporal. Citizens of Malaga have to seek flats with a few offer and very expensive prices.

I'm from Malaga, Spain. The province of Malaga has 'always" been important for tourism in Spain, whilst the capital city was an important industrial city. A few years ago this all began to change. A lot of industries closed down and tourism has grown to its maximum. Nowadays many tourists choose Malaga for their holidays, which means that the centre of the city is always very crowded. Many companies ?. I could tell you of many advantages that tourism brings, but I prefer to speak of the disadvantages that tourism has brought to Malaga. The most important problem is the high rental prices for flats in the city. This is because owners prefer to let out their flats to tourists who often can afford to pay more for renting than local people can afford. Also for the owners, temporary short stay rental is less problematic than long term leasing. Now there are fewer flats available to rent for the citizens of Malaga and the ones that are available are very expensive. 

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