Exercise # 6 - IELTS Hello, there! Could someone help me with correcting these paragraphs, please? Thanks in advance. PS: I haven't attached the line chart because I don't have it on hand. The pie chart illustrates the average spending on mobile phone and residential phone services by year from 2001 to 2010. Generally speaking, expenditures on cell phone gadually increased over time, whereas annual costs on residential phone services steadily dropped throughout the decade considered. In 2001, spending on cell phones services began by approximately $200, while disbursement on residential phone services started by a larger amount of around $700. Over the next five years, expenditures on mobile phone rose to, in a regular manner, just under $600 by the year 2006. Oppositively, costs on residential phone per year sharply plunged up to reach a figure close to $550 in 2006. Turning to the rest of the period, that is, from 2006 to 2010, cell phone services overtook residential phone ones. From 2006 and on, spending on cell phone dramatically went up to just over $700 at the end of period. Meanwhile, disbursement on residential steeply decreased up to reach an amount that rounds $400.