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Lyn
She (please correct my mistake thank) My mother gave me birth when she twenty eight years old.she had little education,but she know many knowledge that make me surprise! I think my mother is beautiful even more than me. she has big eyes,her eyes are very clear and bright, so this is why my dad loves she. My mother is very nice ,often asking for me how to deal with interpersonal relationship. I and my mother are like friend . I am happe that have a pretty and considerate mother
2018년 3월 14일 오후 12:38
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My mother gave birth to me when she was twenty eight years old, me birth when she twenty eight years old.she had little education,but she has a lot of knowledge which surprises me! I think my mother is more beautiful than I am beautiful even more than me. she  She has big eyes,her eyes are very clear and bright and this is why my dad loves her , so this is why my dad loves she. My mother is very nice ,often asking for me how to deal with interpersonal relationship. My mother and I are like friends, I am happy to have a pretty and considerate mother. I and my mother are like friend . I am happe that have a pretty and considerate mother
2018년 3월 14일
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She (please correct my mistake thank)

My mother gave me birth when she was twenty eight years old.she had little education,but she know many knowledge that make me surprise! I think my mother is beautiful  prettier   even more than me. she has big eyes,her eyes are very clear and bright, so this is my why my dad loves she her. My mother is very nice ,often asking for me how to deal with interpersonal relationship. me and my mother are like friend . I am happy that have a pretty and considerate mother
2018년 3월 14일
1

She (please correct my mistakes thanks)

My mother gave birth to me when she was twenty eight years old.me birth when she twenty eight years old. She had little education,but she know many has a lot of knowledge that surprises me!  make me surprise! I think my mother is beautiful,  even more than me. She has big eyes,her eyes are very clear and bright, so this is why my dad loves her she. My mother is very nice ,often asking for me how to deal with interpersonal relationship. I and my mother and I are like friends. I am happy that I have a pretty and considerate mother.


Great job Lyn! :)

2018년 3월 14일
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