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About myself Let me tell you a few words about myself My name is Galina. My mom wanted to name me Irina or Marina. But in that moment my brother was in love with a girl and I was named by him in her honor I am 34 years old. I will celebrate the anniversary in 8 days. We are going to have a party. I live near Moscow in a big city, which calls Odintsovo. But my home region is Yakutya. It is very cold there in winter and because of that my family decided to move. We had many relatives in Moscow and moved here. Then my husband and I took a mortgage in Odintsovo. As for my family, I have a mother, a father and an older brother. And my own family consists of me, my husband and our little girl I work as a sale manager in a pharmaceutical company. I like working with papers and figures. I really like my job.

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About myself

Let me tell you a few words about myself
My name is Galina. My mom wanted to name me Irina or Marina. But in that moment at the time, my brother was in love with a girl and I was named by him in her honor
I am 34 years old. I will celebrate the anniversary my birthday in 8 days. We are going to have a party.
I live near Moscow in a big city, which is called calls Odintsovo. But my hometown region is Yakutya. It is very cold there in the winter and because of that my family decided to move. As we had many relatives in Moscow, we and moved here. Then my husband and I bought a housetook a mortgage in Odintsovo.
As for my family, I have a mother, a father and an older brother. And my own family consists of me, my husband and our little girl
I work as a sales manager in a pharmaceutical company. I like working with papers and figures. I really like my job.

Hi Galina, welcome to italki and thank you for introducing yourself!

Here are a few pointers to improve for next time.

Anniversary is for weddings and not for birth - in English, we say 'birthday'. (Happy birthday, by the way!)

Saying 'took out a mortgage' is fine but it is a little unnatural here. Most people will just say, 'bought a house'. 

Let me know if you have any questions!



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