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İSTANBUL I have lived in İstanbul for a long time.İn the next days I visited to the city again with my daughter.Everthing was same that I have left.What a wonderfull city.

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Hello Aysun. Good notebook entry. There are minor grammatical and spelling errors. Moreover what I don't understand from the write-up is that 'whether you live in Istanbul or you visited Istanbul after a long time'. I used my own judgement to correct the entry. Please feel free to contact me and send me a message. Consider the following:

"I have not travelled  to Istanbul in a long time. Sometime back I visited the city again with my daughter. Everything seem to be the same as I have left. It is a wonderful city."

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"I have been living in Istanbul for a long time. I visited the city recently with my daughter. Everything was same as I have left. What a wonderful city it is."

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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