About work

Five days a week I go to work. I don't like my work, but I try to do my job to the best of my ability, because I want to have acceptable quality of life and my work gives me it. For example, I want to buy my own flat. I don't abandon hope to buy it because my work gives me access to the purchase of the apartment.
That is the only reason why I go to work and don't miss my work without reason.
So, if I dont like my work, what do I like? I like go to home after work. I spend my free time with my boyfriend. I also like to draw and, sometimes, when i see an Instagram-famous painter and see the beauty, I dream that I will become a painter also.

About work

Five days a week I go to work. I don't like my work, but I try to do my job to the best of my ability, because I want to make an acceptable level my life living and my work gives me this. For example, I want to buy my own flat and I don't abandon hope to buy it and my work gives me access o  enables me to purchase of the apartment.
It is the only reason why I go to work and don't miss work without reason.
But if I don't like my work, what do I like then? I like go to home after work and spend my free time with my boyfriend. I also like to draw and, sometimes, when I see on instagram a famous painting and take in its beauty, I dream that I will become a freelance (?) painter also.

Notes:

- The first person personal prounoun "I" is always capitalised (despite what you might see on social media and texting)

- Contracted verbs use an apostrophe - e.g. can't, don't, wouldn't...

- When the subject of the verb is singular, the verb takes the ending -s: he gives, she takes, it goes...

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