Regret Please help me to revise it, thank you! There was a womanish boy in my class when I was a junior high school student, and because of his temperament, he usually taunted by the other boys. If I

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Regret Please help me to revise it, thank you! There was a womanish boy in my class when I was a junior high school student, and because of his temperament, he usually taunted by the other boys. If I walked in on such situation, I always scolded them, but it is just on occasion. In more time, it occured on where I couldn’t come aware of. Since the past two years, I has stricken with regret after reading an article about the author experienced bully in the school, because I never tried to search for help from teachers but doing something unhelpful. This affair made me learn the lesson is: In the course of my rest life, I will never do nothing if I find the bully happens around me. I notice that there are many victims choose to suicide or do something horrible to society as revenge, and it always cause more misery. I believe, if everyone comes out there personal bubbles and to contribute in stopping the bully, the whole world must be better.

2018년 5월 6일 오전 6:21

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There was a womanish boy in my class when I was a junior high school student, and because of his temperament, he was usually taunted by the other boys. If I walked in on such a situation, I always scolded them, but it was just on occasion. In more time,

Sometimes, it occured on when I couldwasn’t able to help / aware it was happening. come aware of. Since In the past two years, I have been stricken with regret after reading an article about the author experiencinged bullying in the school, because I never tried to search ask for help from teachers. but doing something unhelpful.

This affair made me learn the a lesson. is In the course of my rest life, I will never do nothing if I find the see someone being bullied /see bullying bully happens around me.

Affair is a weird one to use. It works but the context is slightly off. You could just say 'this made me learn a lesson' and because you have been talking about an experience, you don't need the clarification.

I notice that there are many victims who choose to commit suicide or do something horrible to society as revenge, and it always causes more misery. I believe, if everyone comes out of their personal bubbles and to contribute in stopping the bullying, the whole world must will be better.

Please help to revise, thank you!