About me))
What can I tell about myself?
Let me introduce myself. My name is Aliya an I am seventeen. I was born on the 8th of June 1994 in Russia where I live now with my parents. I have also a sister. I study in the high school in 11th form. My favorite lessons are history and society studying.
I think I am romantic, calm, honest and modest girl. My friends say I am considerate. I trust them.
In my free time I am interested in photography, interesting books and sport. And I like modern music of course. My favorite books are «Gone with the wind» and «Wuthering Heights» and other…
I think that is all))
if there are errors, please correct me!
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About me))
What can I tell you about myself? (what can i say about myself)
Let me introduce myself. My name is Aliya and I am seventeen. I was born on the 8th of June 1994 in Russia where and I live now with my parents. I have also a (younger/ older) sister. I study in the high school in the 11th form standard. My favorite lessons subjects are history and society studying.
I think I am romantic, calm, honest and a modest girl. My friends say I am considerate and I trust believe them.
In my free time I am interested in photography, interesting books and sport. (Better way to write is - my hobbies are photography, sports and interesting books) And I like modern music of course. My favorite books are «Gone with the wind»(mine favorite too, most amazing book i have ever heard) and «Wuthering Heights» and other…
I think that is all))
if there are errors, please correct me!
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If you are interested, I have photos on a flickr site:
http://www.flickr.com/photos/brett_hornby/
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Hi,Aliya,so glad to know u here,i'm a chinese,and i like it english too,although it's little poor to me.First of all,i read ur composition so carfully,it's nice to me,but i find there r several errors,i have corrected them,hope it's helpful to you.thx^^,,,,,,
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I think your sentences are correct..they dont need to be correct..honestly, i'm curious about your photos.because you mentioned that you're interested in photography..if you desire i'd like to see your photos..
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About me))
What can I tell about myself?
Let me introduce myself. My name is Aliya an I am seventeen. I was born on the 8th of June 1994 in Russia where I live now with my parents. I have also a sister. I study at the high school in 11th form. My favorite lessons are history and society studying.
I think I am romantic, calm, honest and modest girl. My friends say I am considerate. I trust them.
In my free time I am interested in photography, interesting books and sport. And I like modern music of course. My favorite books are «Gone with the wind» and «Wuthering Heights» and other…
I think that is all))
if there is any error, please correct me!
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