Fran
First notebook entry: Introducing myself I'm very interested in improving my english. In return, I can teach Spanish. I love teaching and I do it with pleasure.
2011년 6월 29일 오전 10:03
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First notebook entry: Introducing myself

(Nothing is grammatically wrong, but I'll suggest just a few improvements if you want to keep the introduction this concise.)

I'm interested in improving my English and, if you're willing to help, I'd be happy to teach Spanish in return. I love teaching since it's an activity I always find fulfilling .

¡Espero que te he ayudado!

2011년 9월 3일

Great response Fran. In your introduction you should also try to write a little about yourself like whats your name, where are you from, what are your interests, why do you want to learn English language etc. Consider the following:

"Hello. My name is Fran. I am from Spain. My native language is Spanish. I am learning English. I want to improve my English language skills to the higher proficiency level. Moreover in return, I can teach Spanish. I like teaching Spanish and its a pleasure to do so. So if you are interested to connect with me I would be pleased. Thank you."

Hope it helps. My name is Anas. I am form India. I am learning Spanish and French. My English is quite good. So if you would like to connect and interact, feel free to do so.

Regards. 

Anas

2011년 6월 29일
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