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[ 200 Rainy Season In Japan. (1) ] Would you mind correcting my essay? If you were me, how would 
you go about writing it? 
Which part should I describe in detail? I hope my explanations are clear. I hope you can understand this. It’s now on rainy season in Japan on The begging of June to meddle of July. It’s a quite humid as well. When the season left, the frighten muggy summer coming. At that time, I see a bunch of the rice fields planting the seedlings there and here. It’s a magnificent beautiful scenery in the countryside. It’s good for relaxing and recovering your eyes whom watch PC and smart phone screen everyday.

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[ 200 Rainy Season In Japan. (1) ]

Would you mind correcting my essay? If you were me, how would 
you go about writing it? 
Which part should I describe in detail? I hope my explanations are clear. I hope you can understand this.

It’s now on rainy season in Japan on The begging of June to meddle of July. It’s a quite humid as well. When the season left, the frighten muggy summer coming.

The rainy season has started in Japan, which runs from the beginning of June through to the middle of July bringing with it the muggy summer weather.

At that time, I see a bunch of the rice fields planting the seedlings there and here. It’s a magnificent beautiful scenery in the countryside.


Around this time I enjoy the beautiful scenery throughout the countryside of the rice fields with their newly planted seedlings .


It’s good for relaxing and recovering your eyes whom watch PC and smart phone screen everyday.

It is a welcome change for tired eyes spending most of the time fixed on computer and phone screens,

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[ 200 Rainy Season In Japan. (1) ]

Would you mind correcting my essay? If you were me, how would 
you go about writing it? 
Which part should I describe in detail? I hope my explanations are clear. I hope you can understand this.

It’s is now on the rainy season in Japan. It starts from June to the middle  on The begging of June to meddle of July. It’s a quite is also humid as well. When it is over, the season left, the frighten horrendous muggy summer will be coming.

At During that time, I will see a bunch of the  some rice fields being planted with the seedlings there and here. It’s -- a magnificent and beautiful scenery in the countryside.

It’s good is a great way to for relaxing and recovering your one's eyes whom watch from looking at PC and smart phone screens everyday.
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[ 200 Rainy Season In Japan. (1) ]

Would you mind correcting my essay? If you were me, how would 
you go about writing it? 
Which part should I describe in detail? I hope my explanations are clear. I hope you can understand this.

It’s now on rainy season in Japan which lasts from the beginning of June to the middle of July, It’s also quite humid as well. When rainy season is over, the (1)frighten muggy summer arrives.

At that time, I see a bunch of the rice fields planting the seedlings here and there. It’s a magnificently beautiful scenery in the countryside.

It’s good for relaxing and resting your eyes that watch a PC and smart phone screen everyday.

(1) 

Either use frightening, or fricken.

Frightening means scary, and fricken is a slang term for something unwanted

どちらかを恐ろしい、またはfrickenを使用してください。

怖いのは恐ろしいことを意味し、frickenは望ましくないもののための言葉です
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[ 200 Rainy Season In Japan. (1) ]

Would you mind correcting my essay? If you were me, how would 
you go about writing it? 
Which part should I describe in detail? I hope my explanations are clear. I hope you can understand this.

It’s now the rainy season in Japan. It occurs from the beginning of June until the middle of July. It’s a quite humid as well. When the rainy season leaves, the frightening muggy summer comes in.

At that time, I saw some rice fields which were planted with seedlings here and there. I think it’s a magnificent and a beautiful scenery in the countryside. It’s good for relaxing and it refreshes your eyes after looking for a long time on your PCs or smart phone screen everyday.


*** to give you an idea on the proper usage of the word "bunch", please try visiting this website for sample sentences: http://sentence.yourdictionary.com/bunch

Keep it up Hirosan! 


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