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Practicing english writting! Hello! I hope you'll can make the corrections of this text! Since this year, I start to study russian and some of french, because I would like to travel some other country, like Canada, France, Russia or Australia to can study cinematography. I don't know yet which will be my destiny. In my country, even in the present, it's so hard to study this career. There are just four universities that offers cinematic careers, and they don't be nothing serious. Also, they don't count with the technical equipment necessaries and qualified teachers, as well they are very expensive. Some years from now, I would like to be typing my own screenplays and direct them, starting making shortfilms, then movies and finally, TV series or the famous soap operas, that are very popular in latin countries and Turkey. I would like to write soap operas scripts and why not, direct them too, because I think by television it's possible to reach the stories to more viewers, compared cinemas possibilities. I don't know yet how I'll get all of this! There are very road so far!

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Hello! I hope you can make corrections in this text!

Since this year, I've been studying Russian and some French, because I would like to travel to another country, such as Canada, France, Russia or Australia, to study cinematography. I don't know which will be my destination yet.

In my country, even in the present, it's so hard to pursue this career. There are only four universities that offer careers in cinematography and they are not serious. Also, they don't have the necessary technical equipment and qualified teachers, yet they are very expensive.

Some years from now, I would like to start writing my own screenplays and direct them, make short_films, then movies and finally, TV series or soap operas, that are very popular in Latin countries and Turkey.

I would like to write soap opera scripts and direct them too, because I think that through television, it's possible to reach more viewers, in comparison to the cinema.

I don't know how I'll achieve all of this yet! There is a very long road ahead!
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Practicing english writting!

Hello! I hope you  you'll  can make the corrections of to this text! (could say of this text I think)

Since  This year I started to studying  russian and some of french because I would like to travel to some other country countries like Canada, France, Russia or Australia to can study cinematography. I don't know yet which will be my destiny.

In my country, even in the present, it's so hard to study this career. There are just four universities that offers  offer cinematic careers and they don't be nothing serious are not really serious. Also, they don't count with have the technical equipment necessaries and qualified teachers that are necessary.  They also as well they  are very expensive as well.

Some years from now, I would like to be typing my own screenplays and directing  them, starting making short-films, then movies and finally a TV series or the famous soap operas that are very popular in latin countries and Turkey.

I would like to write soap operas scripts and why not, while I'm at it, why couldn't I direct them too.  because I think by that  through television it's possible to reach deliver the stories to more viewers, compared to the possibilities with cinema.  cinemas possibilities.

I don't know yet how I'll get all of this! There are very road so far It is a long road ahead!

(i hope this helps)

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