Thinking
I used to think , helping people is a part of my life.
But as the time goes, my mind changed.
It doesn't help me get more friends.
I don't know why they leave me.
I think I did not do anything wrong.
Or, here is the problem.
Am I annoying?
I just want to know.
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Thinking
I used to think, helping people is a part of my life.But as time goes by, my mind is changing //or as time went by, my mind changed ///
It doesn't help me get more friends.
I don't know why they leave me.
I think I did not do anything wrong.
Or, here is the problem:
Am I annoying?
I just want to know.
These corrections are trying to keep a consistent tense, a sense of time, in line 2. The punctuation poitns are very minor.
It would be a shame to give up helping people, whether it brings you reward or not!
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