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I made a mistake in a rectial ! I don’t want to remember my performance when I played harmonica at the private harmonica recital.

When I played it, I had a lot of mistake in my tune.

I needed to play well because I got a reward at a competition.

When l played, I couldn’t hear a back sometimes. I was upset.

I know that was a masking effect of sound. But other people played well.

I’ve been so downhearted since that day.

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I made a mistake in a  at my rectial !

I don’t want to remember my performance when I played the harmonica at the a private harmonica recital.

When I played it, I had a lot of mistakes in my tune.

I needed to play well, because I got a reward at a competition.

When l played, I couldn’t hear a it back sometimes. I was upset.

I know that was a masking effect of sound. But other people played well.

I’ve been so  very downhearted since that day.

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Thank you for pointing it out :) I mean "I had gotten a reward at a competition "
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" I needed to play well because I got a reward at a competition. " Does this mean that you are going to get a reward at this competition or that you had gotten a reward in the past from a musical competition?

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